Comment 8224
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Welcome aboard BogusRed! I'm so glad you've decided to post your work; we're always here to help!
I think you've got a very good thing going with this drawing; perhaps if you were able to move the mouth to the left (our left) a bit, it would help that pesky jaw line problem. It won't go away, but it should help. One more thing I see; her breasts aren't quite in proportion to the rest of her body. If we think about it, the breast is simply fatty tissue that originates from the clavicle and breastbone. I suggest taking a look at an anatomy book (no blushing!), and determing how things...well...lie.
Again, welcome aboard, and I'm off to see the rest of your art! *runs over to next page*
I think you've got a very good thing going with this drawing; perhaps if you were able to move the mouth to the left (our left) a bit, it would help that pesky jaw line problem. It won't go away, but it should help. One more thing I see; her breasts aren't quite in proportion to the rest of her body. If we think about it, the breast is simply fatty tissue that originates from the clavicle and breastbone. I suggest taking a look at an anatomy book (no blushing!), and determing how things...well...lie.
Again, welcome aboard, and I'm off to see the rest of your art! *runs over to next page*Comment ID 8224
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Thank You! I'll consider taking anatomy. I guess It's just that is a rather unobserved area that I take pride in not personally knowing about. Hehe. I really agree with your perspective, her mouth would look much better the left. Maybe I'll redo the Pic. Thanks!
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