Comment 94994
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Another beautiful dragon piece! you captured the feeling of a storm well.
i see you requested a critique. one thing that I think might make this piece stronger is more contrast. right now you have a lot of mid tones. one technique you could try that would help give you a stronger composition is to make foreground elements darker (such as the tree branches and the dragon in the forground). This would help it feel even more dramatic.
Another suggestion for you is to observe the shapes that the negative space of the branches is creating to add more interest to the composition.
Nice job!
i see you requested a critique. one thing that I think might make this piece stronger is more contrast. right now you have a lot of mid tones. one technique you could try that would help give you a stronger composition is to make foreground elements darker (such as the tree branches and the dragon in the forground). This would help it feel even more dramatic.
Another suggestion for you is to observe the shapes that the negative space of the branches is creating to add more interest to the composition.
Nice job!
Comment ID 94994
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i went ahead and did a mockup for you of what a darker foreground could look like. see attached. notice that it creates a lot more depth
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