Comment 96251
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Hello, I think this is a pretty cool character. I saw that you were looking for constructive critique and wanted to help out so I've made a quick rundown of everything in the image I've attached below.
I hope this advice helps you, either at present or in the future!
I hope this advice helps you, either at present or in the future!
Comment ID 96251
![[Art] Arianrhod](https://storage.googleapis.com/paperdemon-prod-la/submissions/thumbs/art_39450_thumb_d88c3b778ec16fef39975f291a5346895ed7609bb8d10.png)
Aaahhhhh! Bless you! This helps a lot :0 the only thing I'd say is that she is meant to be leaning on the staff she's a bit slouchy, but I've yet to define why she doesn't stand up straight.
she's a bit slouchy, but I've yet to define why she doesn't stand up straight.
Anyhow that's alright. And sorry about that, I wasn't aware the staff-leaning was intentional. Tried to focus on balancing the pose.
Anyways you're always free to take away what you want from the critique image. Just happy to help!
And no you're good! :0 my poses tend to be stiff in the first place so this really helps!! Thank you!