A disgruntled politician decides to make a deal with an unusual house guest. This is the very first part of a novel I'm writing. It happens five years before the rest of the story and while it is important, the passage isn't integral to the rest of the story. Tell me what you think!

Edmund Dauger's account of his time spent in a reformation center/prison in the dystopian society of Paradise. Honest comments are appreciated; I'm fairly thick-skinned.