quick song. that I wanted to write. already put to guitar. in the feel for this V-day. please leave feedback
feelings of desire run through my veins. the rush of blood to the head. the weakness in me.
I've been having a difficult time. Life is turning around and upsidedown. I just want to be a kid.
Please comment. I just wrote this. I had a feeling. It doesn't make much sense and isn't in a set form. But just take a glance.
Please read and leave a word or two. I am a solo musician and would like to get the thoughts of writers like this community, to help me in my writing. So please critique. And in addition, please read my other lyrics/poems. Thank you very much!