Thoughts: Chapter 1

Published Mar 5, 2006, 7:09:39 PM UTC | Last updated Mar 5, 2006, 7:09:39 PM | Total Chapters 1

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Hm, while dwelling in self-hate and loathing, i wrote this poem. Funny. I believed that i can't learn nothing new from poetry...

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Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Untold was the pain,
which left her torn,
through cold,
blue eyes,
i see,
inside a wreched life of darkness,
i mourn,
maybe it is I,
the real me.

Untrustworthy being,
of darkness spawned,
half-breed of hate and despise,
my hollow shell,
resembleness of a human male,
is a fake,
the creature,
that lurks inside,
end of joy,
end of happiness.

Unforgiving act's,
done by a damned being,
leaving behind just,
twisted hopes,
and twisted faces.

Through the flames of hate i see them coming,
through the flames of hate i see them shouting,
cold eyes looking mercylessly towards them,
naked chest against the cold wind,
knee-deep in the snow,
as the dawn raises,
my slender hands,
covered with blood,
unforetold cruelity.

The wind waves my hair,
and inside the damned yell's in the name of survival,
but this is the beginning of the end,
the sky are descending,
casting unreal scenery before my eyes,
the damned creature,
with power of ending fragile life,
soon no more.

I look up,
and see the stars,
i smile,
the red flesh between my teeth showing,
the evil,
that watches,
has judged,
and i will wander.

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