The problem is me....: Chapter 1

The smiles are fake

The happy is gone

I'll do nothing all day long

The blade is stained

My eyes are wet

Everyone has left

They all abandend me

Just like i did them

Now i see why the all leave

Its me.....

Why am i like this?

I be mean and expect them to stay?

If i was them i'd run away.

But i can't run,

I can't hide,

Because you see,

The problem is me.

 

 

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