You don't know me: Chapter 1

Published Nov 3, 2008, 2:31:59 AM UTC | Last updated Nov 3, 2008, 2:31:59 AM | Total Chapters 1

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Something I wrote a while ago. Just wanted to get some critique on this.

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Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Without knowing my name I heard someone call it

And I was me

Without knowing your name I heard the wind whisper it

And I knew you

Without knowing pain I said ‘hello’

And you smiled

Without expecting pain I fell for you

And I smiled

Without knowing your love I saw someone take it

And I hated her

Without stopping to cry the years flew by

And I found you again

And I knew your name

And I knew your face

And I knew You

I whispered ‘hello’ 

And you smiled

And I cried

You didn’t know me.

 

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