Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Unwritten Words of Romeo
You left me in this Darkness
As silent as a tomb,
Without a star to guide me,
From this Lovers Doom.
God in Heaven I pray thee
Grant my only wish.
When Adder's Breath doth take my life,
Damn me not to Hell,
But deliver me to her starry height
Fore Love can know no blight.
Come vile thing of Darkness!!
Stop this torture of my soul,
Numb the pain of my broken heart!
Strike me down like poisoned dart,
Deliver me to her!!
Ah Juliet, why have thou gone?
Leaving me with this bleeding wound?
Come Death on swift wings
That I might hear her voice again.
Sweet Juliet,
I Come!!
You left me in this Darkness
As silent as a tomb,
Without a star to guide me,
From this Lovers Doom.
God in Heaven I pray thee
Grant my only wish.
When Adder's Breath doth take my life,
Damn me not to Hell,
But deliver me to her starry height
Fore Love can know no blight.
Come vile thing of Darkness!!
Stop this torture of my soul,
Numb the pain of my broken heart!
Strike me down like poisoned dart,
Deliver me to her!!
Ah Juliet, why have thou gone?
Leaving me with this bleeding wound?
Come Death on swift wings
That I might hear her voice again.
Sweet Juliet,
I Come!!
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