I wanna know: Hey Baby

Published Jan 8, 2012, 6:57:34 AM UTC | Last updated Jan 12, 2012, 2:39:15 AM | Total Chapters 3

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Chapter 2: Hey Baby

Hey Baby, when you look at me what do you see?

Hopfully not another terrified soul.

Another person to break?

Another painful existiance?

Hey Baby, Who do you think you are?

As you pull closer to me, Like a sadistic star.

Do you think your the best?

Do you think you can take me, just like that?

Hey Baby, What's going on.

The pain hits hard.

Why did you hurt me?

What's wrong Baby?

 

The pain hits, with another bullet of words

Shoot at me.

What happened Baby?

You get a little closer.

And a little more.

Your hand strays

And I feel hate 

GO AWAY!

 

I hear your voice your simple words.

'Baby It'll feel good.'

I hear what you said and I just can't believe

That your the one,

I hoped would marry me.

 

Hey Baby, when you look at me what do you see?

Hopfully not another terrified soul.

Another person to break?

Another painful existiance?

Hey Baby, Who do you think you are?

As you pull closer to me, Like a sadistic star.

Do you think your the best?

Do you think you can take me, just like that?

Hey Baby, What's going on.

The pain hits hard.

Why did you hurt me?

What's wrong Baby?

 

I hit your hands

I try to run

Oh why did I let myself trust

You grab me and pull me close

Whispering, whispering

'It will be fine.'

I scream, I yell waiting for help

And here it comes,

 

If I had known it would be him.

I would have taken what I got.

I see his eyes burn with fury.

I see your body hit the pavement.

Lifeless, Lifeless as my stone cold heart.

He pulls me close and whispers.

'You are mine, never forget that.'

 

Hey Baby, when you look at me what do you see?

Hopfully not another terrified soul.

Another person to break?

Another painful existiance?

Hey Baby, Who do you think you are?

As you pull closer to me, Like a sadistic star.

Do you think your the best?

Do you think you can take me, just like that?

Hey Baby, What's going on.

The pain hits hard.

Why did you hurt me?

What's wrong Baby?

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