Survivor- Sketch

Posted Oct 30, 2011, 9:21:52 PM UTC

Ok so I was looking at it and just was not looking right to me anymore.   So basically did a resketch from a smaller version. 

It still doesn't looking right to me.   So here I am asking for help. 

I have cleaned it up some so that the background did not distract.

 So here are my issues.

1.  I'm trying to go for a sassy pissed off woman and trying to get one hip alittle higher than the other but actually sure which one.  I believe its the right side( looking at the drawing). with the wieght in the left leg.

2. Is the chest area, I seem to be seeing it wrong.

3. Last I hope, are the arms, I know that they are smaller at the elbow, but is there anything else noticeable.

 

 Free feel to mention anything else besides the face and the hands.  One at a time.  :)

 

Thank you

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  • Oct 31, 2011, 8:02:57 PM UTC
    The hip that's bearing the weight would be the higher one, the other hip usually drops. Here it looks like she's stepping forward but hasn't shifted her weight yet to her front leg. The only other thing that jumps out at me is the angle of her shoulders - typically our shoulders shift opposite to our hips; so if her right hip is dropped, her left shoulder should be dropped slightly. Otherwise I think you've got a good start! The elbows might be a little thin, but it's hard to tell without knowing how stylized/realistic you're going for.
    • Nov 2, 2011, 2:19:42 AM UTC
      Thank you. I cant seem to figure the hips and never really thought about the shoulders. Thank you again.