Request from Vincent Valentine

Posted May 20, 2006, 4:19:36 AM UTC

Alright so here it is nearly done. It's supposed to be 882 basically a girl version of Vincent Valentine with the actual Vincent in the pic too :yes: If you want me to change anything PM me K, 882 ?

I'm posting it to show that I am in fact working on it :grin: and I just need som advice before I ink it. General advice is good I'm not looking for anything in particular.

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882
May 21, 2006, 8:32:05 PM UTC
OMFG! THANK YOU! I look so cool! ^////^ And Vincent looks totally hawt! *Drools* Thank you so much, I can't wait to see it when it is done, and colored, your artwork is so awesome, and I hope to be as good as you and my father when I am older. Thank you very much, and I hope we can talk more once school is out, it's a real bumer the last week and a half. >< And I LOVE the way Vincent is eyeing me. *Blush* He wants me XD *FAVES*
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- Jilly
  May 22, 2006, 3:36:44 PM UTC
  I'm glad you like it and don't worry just practice everyday and you'll be where I'm at when you get my age. I was esactly where you were at when I was in middle school so no worries I'll hopefully have it colored and fixed up soon btw
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BogusRed
May 21, 2006, 12:51:53 PM UTC
Hi Jill.

Here's a few things to watch out for (see attached image). Her left hand's pose is a little akward. The ball of the hand is tucked behind her body when from this perspective the ball of the hand should be seen.

It may be too late to fix the heads, but for your next drawing watch your head shapes. The backs of their heads are cut off a lot. I've outlined your head shapes in blue and a more natural head shape in red.
Image attached
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- Jilly
  May 23, 2006, 2:00:36 PM UTC
  Thanks for the advice,Red I'll be sure to make the changes before I ink it. and that new visual critique is really nifty
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  BogusRed
  May 23, 2006, 5:07:24 PM UTC
  yeah it comes in handy. glad i could help
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