Comment 103268
Comment ID 103268
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Hello! This design looks lovely!! However, there are a few things that will need to be fixed before we can approve it:
• Pangare is a marking that must be soft-edged or blurred, but it looks hard-edged and textured ( fur-looking ) here. You can find examples of Eláfkeria with Pangare in the marking's guide! Please fix this.
There's also a few details to be fixed in the import information!
• In the genotype, please fix Amber's code ( nAm ) ( "nAM" to "nAm" ).
• Please make sure the origins link works as a clickable hyperlink!
Admin note: please make a new post for the new design! We need the previous design post(s) intact for judging purposes ( and to make the process easier ).
Once you've made the edits, please post them to the Design Approvals & Corrections forum.
Thank you! 💛
— SheepMomther
• Pangare is a marking that must be soft-edged or blurred, but it looks hard-edged and textured ( fur-looking ) here. You can find examples of Eláfkeria with Pangare in the marking's guide! Please fix this.
There's also a few details to be fixed in the import information!
• In the genotype, please fix Amber's code ( nAm ) ( "nAM" to "nAm" ).
• Please make sure the origins link works as a clickable hyperlink!
Admin note: please make a new post for the new design! We need the previous design post(s) intact for judging purposes ( and to make the process easier ).
Once you've made the edits, please post them to the Design Approvals & Corrections forum.
Thank you! 💛
— SheepMomther
I believe Unders got confused for pangare! here’s a image labeling each of them:
Unders is hard edged like on the geno sheet, while Pangare covers the minimum but not the full max - you can’t see the edge of it bc the other genos go on top of it. (not sure if this changes it, but i thought there wasn’t an issue about it since i haven’t gotten pinged for it.)
I also want to note that i will make a separate post for each new update!
May I ask what gene is covering Pangare? From what I'm seeing, Unders is on top of Pangare ( which is ok ), but Blanket doesn't touch Pangare at all, so the edges of Pangare ( the white marking you point out ) are still visible on the Soil base. And there are no other genes that can cover Pangare, so this confuses me a bit.
This is what I mean when I say Pangare needs to be soft-edged, in case it helps:
https://www.paperdemon.com/app/art/view/41453
Please help me understand what you mean! I'd like to be able to help.
— SheepMomther
Burn is ok on top of Pangare! In the marking order guide, Burn is set as a "Wild Card" marking, so it can go on top of or below any gene that doesn't specify otherwise.
I'm glad I could help you understand! Now all you have to do is resubmit the edited version to be judged! 💛
— SheepMomther