Callum import
Name: Callum
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Species: Eláfkeria-ARPG
Owner:
BraveKnight
BraveKnight
Feathers: Lean
Body: Koinos
Gender: He/Him
Sex: Male
Health: Healthy
Horn: Spear
Tail: Tuft
Genotype: Ss/ii/ee/nBk/nBl/nBs/nBr/nCu/nFr/nP/nSu/nT/nU/nAM
Phenotype: Frosted Burned Amber Soil with Beak, Blanket, Blush, Cupid, Pangare, Sun, Tips, and Unders
Mutations:
Free Markings:
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Harmony Rank: Dissonant
Blooming Trial: incomplete
Sabering Rank: -
Magic Ability:
Items: -
Companions: -
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Proof of Origins: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/comments/view/101175
Lineage:
-------------------- SSS: Unknown
---------- SS: Unknown
-------------------- SSD: Unknown
Stag: Unknown
-------------------- SDS: Unknown
---------- SD: Unknown
-------------------- SDD: Unknown
-------------------- DSS: Unknown
---------- DS: Unknown
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Doe: Unknown
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---------- DD: Unknown
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Designers:
DashOfJupiter
DashOfJupiter
Eláfkeria are an ARPG closed species by SheepMomther
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• Pangare is a marking that must be soft-edged or blurred, but it looks hard-edged and textured ( fur-looking ) here. You can find examples of Eláfkeria with Pangare in the marking's guide! Please fix this.
There's also a few details to be fixed in the import information!
• In the genotype, please fix Amber's code ( nAm ) ( "nAM" to "nAm" ).
• Please make sure the origins link works as a clickable hyperlink!
Admin note: please make a new post for the new design! We need the previous design post(s) intact for judging purposes ( and to make the process easier ).
Once you've made the edits, please post them to the Design Approvals & Corrections forum.
Thank you! 💛
— SheepMomther
I believe Unders got confused for pangare! here’s a image labeling each of them:
Unders is hard edged like on the geno sheet, while Pangare covers the minimum but not the full max - you can’t see the edge of it bc the other genos go on top of it. (not sure if this changes it, but i thought there wasn’t an issue about it since i haven’t gotten pinged for it.)
I also want to note that i will make a separate post for each new update!
May I ask what gene is covering Pangare? From what I'm seeing, Unders is on top of Pangare ( which is ok ), but Blanket doesn't touch Pangare at all, so the edges of Pangare ( the white marking you point out ) are still visible on the Soil base. And there are no other genes that can cover Pangare, so this confuses me a bit.
This is what I mean when I say Pangare needs to be soft-edged, in case it helps:
https://www.paperdemon.com/app/art/view/41453
Please help me understand what you mean! I'd like to be able to help.
— SheepMomther
Burn is ok on top of Pangare! In the marking order guide, Burn is set as a "Wild Card" marking, so it can go on top of or below any gene that doesn't specify otherwise.
I'm glad I could help you understand! Now all you have to do is resubmit the edited version to be judged! 💛
— SheepMomther
• Frost seems to have an outline and/or resemble bubbles in some parts of the wings, please fix this! Frost cannot have any kind of holes or outlines. I've highlighted where I noticed it the most here: https://sta.sh/0209p8kmczls
• Frosted must be lighter than what it sits on top of, but it's darker than what it sits on top of on several parts of the body, resembling Specks; please fix this! I've highlighted them here: https://sta.sh/024xzrsspqpg
• Burned must be darker than the base coat color, but it's lighter than the base coat in this design, resembling Bleached. Please fix this!
• Burned is not properly blended around the neck, please fix this! Burn needs to be fully blended.
• Beak doesn't fill the minimum coverage; I've overlaid the coverage and pointed out where the coverage is missing here ( yellow is your Beak, white is where it's missing ): https://sta.sh/0fviizqpeb1
• Blanket is going outside the maximum allowed coverage! I've overlaid the coverage and pointed out where it's going off-coverage here: https://sta.sh/028v0wum1ilx
• Pangare will need to cover more of the body to count for minimum coverage!
• Tips is going outside the maximum allowed coverage! I've overlaid the coverage and pointed out where it's going off-coverage here: https://sta.sh/03dunmvkvta
Once you've made the edits, please submit the design to the Design Corrections forum!
Thank you! 💛
— Sheep