Comment 18495

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BogusRed
Nov 12, 2005, 11:22:12 PM UTC
yeah you are right. I think what might not be flowing right is the strokes in the hair and in the leather clothing. They don't look convincing. I like the brushstrokes in the background though. They look kind of cool. His face doesn't look quite right either. I'll have to take another crack at this when I get the chance.

Thank you very much for the critique Jill Big Smile

Comment ID 18495

[Art] Sephiroth Oil Painting
Jilly
Nov 12, 2005, 11:30:43 PM UTC on [Art] Sephiroth Oil Painting
Oh your right about the strokes in the background I like those. The strokes on him though should be smother is what I ment so you could make him out alittle more. And do finish this one I'd really loved to see how it comes out.Grin

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  • BogusRed
    Nov 13, 2005, 11:46:31 AM UTC
    Thanks yeah I totally agree with your critique. And thank you for it.