Well, the dynamics in this one is MUCH more interesting, but I think I know what the main problem with Ethan's head is- He's not actualy looking at Gohan. That expression may just work if he was looking at him. If you can make him look at Gohan, I think you'd find this pic would be a winner ^^ I personally don't think there's anything wrong with the expression- if he's in a bit of a psychotic rage (is this character like this?) Its a hard angle that one... cause you'd se only up to his cheek bones
http://www.paperdemon.com/artview.php/id/3918.html Check out this scrap I just posted to see a very VAGUE impression of what I mean ^^;
I had alot of trouble with his head in general and not just his expression. I think your sketch was exactly what I was going for I just didn't know how to draw it. I'll see if I can change it to look that way thanks much for your comment
Yeah, you chose a particulaly hard angle there hon ^^; I can't think of the last time I tried it myself, which is why my sketch wasn't too great, but find some photo referances, or get a friend or someone to try that angle on them selves. I sometimes get my brother to do that on the ones I can't find refs for ^^;
It was difficult! I found that out the hard way but your sketch cleared it up for me and I'll be able to fix it now. My brother wouldn't pose for me if his life depended on it so I have to wing it sometimes. Like this pic for instance
http://www.paperdemon.com/artview.php/id/3918.html Check out this scrap I just posted to see a very VAGUE impression of what I mean ^^;