Comment 22611
Comment ID 22611
![[Art] Manga P.1](https://storage.googleapis.com/paperdemon-prod-la/submissions/thumbs/art_img_thumb_4183_4591b492461da8cabd448ce32143a1585ebf7f9492370.jpg)
got a grammar error in there
"some thought she had went to work for the new government..."
try: some thought she left to work for the new government; or something like that? other then that.. i'm liken it! very good, your art in here is niceley done. *is axious to see next page* hehe. wonder what's ganna happen..
"some thought she had went to work for the new government..."
try: some thought she left to work for the new government; or something like that? other then that.. i'm liken it! very good, your art in here is niceley done. *is axious to see next page* hehe. wonder what's ganna happen..
I'll have the next page up tomorrow. It's already done but I have to get it in the computer and I'll be good. ^o^