Comment 32440

Comment ID 32440

May 24, 2006, 2:27:36 AM UTC on [Art] Dolphiny Sora

I think so far you are doing pretty good. this is a REALLY hard pose.

I did do a little visual crit for you but its such a tough position that i don't think i even got it right.

Just a couple things to really watch for is his hips are a little wide, the shapes of his forearms need some reshaping. And also the mermaid part could probably be a little longer.

Image attached

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Saiyakupo
May 24, 2006, 8:56:12 AM UTC
Thank you very much! And actually in KDH2, his hips in this form are rather big.. tis what makes him look more adult I guess o: But I don't know if I made it look right. XD; Anyways thanks! :3
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- BogusRed
  May 24, 2006, 10:07:20 AM UTC
  no problem
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Saiyakupo
May 24, 2006, 8:58:16 AM UTC
Oh yesh and thanks so much for the visual critique! Me must get used to the feature I did'nt see it the first time XD; I think it will help improve my pic yes :3
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