Comment 56653

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Aug 29, 2007, 6:13:12 PM UTC

This is beautifully colored.

The only problems I can really see are that her forehead's a little too far set back. And her braids could use more detail.

The hair overlaps in a braid. Remember that.

But overall, great job!

Hope to see more of your stuff!

Comment ID 56653

paintedwings

Aug 29, 2007, 7:03:40 PM UTC on [Art] Aria

Ooo thanks a lot! ^_^ When you say her forehead is too far back, can you clarify a bit more? It's hard for me to see what you mean, like you think it should be more forward, out towards where her nose is?

Lol, yeah, and I got pretty lazy on the braids. I'm still working on my hair techniques... I should get some pictures of braids to reference next time. ^_^

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Cokekitty
Aug 29, 2007, 7:13:36 PM UTC
Bah, no way. I suck at explaining. But hopefully my Visual Crit will do the talking for me.
The curve is pretty crappy, because I did this in Paint , but like I said, just a teensy bit too far back. And when I got a better look at it, the eye was just a little bit too low on her face. I hope this helps.
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- paintedwings
  Aug 29, 2007, 7:27:46 PM UTC
  Ah thanks soo much! That makes way more sense! ^_^
  
  I've never been on a site before with visual critiques, this is cool! I'll have to make use of it some time. I'll definitely keep this as reference for future stuff.
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  Cokekitty
  Aug 30, 2007, 5:27:35 PM UTC
  Yeah, visual crits are VERY handy. Especially since my explanatory skills leave a lot to be desired. It makes things easier when the problems can be remedied from Paint, which is all I really have. xD
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