Comment 68240
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People are very reluctant to help to be honest >.> Unless you put in your comments thing that you want to be roasted, people wont usually give you constructive for two reasons- No time, and secondly, its SO easy to say it wrong and offend the person, and then get yelled at cause it was an old sketch or one they just drew for fun >.> Me personaly? I'll crit anyone that asks me cause I'm sick of giving crit and them not bothering to learn from it. So really, no offence, but its not just you ^^; My suggestion? Put in your comment that you want crit on specific things and label the pic as roast me. You labelled this as pot luck, so I wasn't sure if you'd care about my comment much ^^; You sounded abit like you would care in your comment, which is why I thought I'd try.
Small body of water.... I'd say it'd make droplets of water with swirly magic around them. It'd be rather cute to see too ^^ Just, what ever option you do take, make sure it looks wild an chaotic. As your magic is right this second, it looks static cause it's all parallel and measured. Umm... this one isn't a finished pic or anything, but maybe it's clear enough to show what I mean- [thumb9706] I haven't done anything fancy to it beside a dodgy motion blur (wow- it looks so rude XD) but the droplets of water are kinda helixing around the two in the middle, the dark swirls outside the cloak are a different spell, but that's ok. Spells come in lots of different forms, and it all depends on what elements it incorporates to how it looks. [thumb6501] This one has a guy (Alex) using his power to form some dragon wings- I've made the wings white at the base, cause that's where the most energy would be- the flames off it gradually get reder cause they're moving away from the source- his back. [comic69] um... can't give a pretty link to the page, but page 9- in this, the world's protection is broken, so I'd say that the sky would look shattered, cause it is like the shield of the world in a sense. Page 23 also has an example of a wind power. That comic has alot of magic though I wont bore you with pointing it all out >.<
Small body of water.... I'd say it'd make droplets of water with swirly magic around them. It'd be rather cute to see too ^^ Just, what ever option you do take, make sure it looks wild an chaotic. As your magic is right this second, it looks static cause it's all parallel and measured. Umm... this one isn't a finished pic or anything, but maybe it's clear enough to show what I mean- [thumb9706] I haven't done anything fancy to it beside a dodgy motion blur (wow- it looks so rude XD) but the droplets of water are kinda helixing around the two in the middle, the dark swirls outside the cloak are a different spell, but that's ok. Spells come in lots of different forms, and it all depends on what elements it incorporates to how it looks. [thumb6501] This one has a guy (Alex) using his power to form some dragon wings- I've made the wings white at the base, cause that's where the most energy would be- the flames off it gradually get reder cause they're moving away from the source- his back. [comic69] um... can't give a pretty link to the page, but page 9- in this, the world's protection is broken, so I'd say that the sky would look shattered, cause it is like the shield of the world in a sense. Page 23 also has an example of a wind power. That comic has alot of magic though I wont bore you with pointing it all out >.<
Comment ID 68240
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Ah, I should shouldn'T I... Hehe, Im still new to this, XD. Sheezyartist Here. I wasn't really looking for a 'roast me' On this one.
wow, Im gettting alot more comments on this site, then the other..
anyways.
Ah, thakns for the tip. Maybe i might bother to go and redo it, but i hightly doubt it. I'll just keep in mind and book mark the pages, here fo rhelp if i really need it. XD. Thanks for being so helpful. XD.
wow, Im gettting alot more comments on this site, then the other..
anyways.
Ah, thakns for the tip. Maybe i might bother to go and redo it, but i hightly doubt it. I'll just keep in mind and book mark the pages, here fo rhelp if i really need it. XD. Thanks for being so helpful. XD.
XD. At first I could only draw really bad females. I mean, they were almost stick figures... but i just kept adapting, and trying different styles... I'm still not to where i want to be, but im a TOTAL perfectionist. so Eh, theres teh explaination why when it doesnt turn out they way i want it to i ahte it.. No matter what anybody else says.
http://www.paperdemon.com/forums/viewtopic.php/2306.html
Check out the above forum
and I enjoy Drawing, its just that Im a Prefectionest and if it doesnt come out the way i want it to, or imangined it, well... you get the idea..
Thouhg its not as bad as it was the beginngin of last year, Ive eased up on myself.
and *book marks*