Script Frenzy day 18

Today I have  finished writing the second script. I mean I have written all scenes that I have planned for this script and am at lower end of my target lenth (in comic pages) for that story.

I will use the remaining time to rewise my scripts and try get some more material in. I am going to first go through the material to see where I can add more action or dialogue that would add depth to the story and characters. I will also try to rewise my panel descriptions. A third item to for rewision is adding material to change the pacing of the story - that is to create contrast between fast paced parts and more slow scenes.

Page count is 83