a twist on basic chemical facts. how can you sit through a class talking about chemical attraction and not seize the opportunity? nothing risque, nothing gained, eh? tell me if its too mature. its nothing explict, i just dont know what the standards are

this was, to be honest, written for me. as always i love comments and critiques, but please remember that this was not done from a strict sort of structure or want to impress. also as always, i don't know why the first line is a repeat. i did not submit it as such.

we all know the feeling....what happens at about 2 o'clock when the coffee's running low and the paper pile doesn't seem to be shrinking....please comment and CRITIQUE.

the truth about what happens in the inner circles of adolescence. just a little something i wrote during class....on my cell phone. ^^; haha, i needed practice with the buttons... please leave comments and critiques.

a quick, interesting idea. why are we so eager to slap labels on things? to categorize and sort everything from emotions to reactions? i vote we take the neutral path.

A darker, more realistic side of motherly instinct and cruelty. Manipulation, bitterness, and disgust. not quite finished.

What happens when the city's calm camouflage disintegrates. please read. i am new here, and in desperate need of some critique.