poem for manga: silence's poem

Published Feb 13, 2006, 12:31:55 AM UTC | Last updated Feb 13, 2006, 12:31:55 AM | Total Chapters 1

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i hope it's okies if i post this poem, i've been wanting some insight about it for some time now. the main charry in my comic writes this... and it must be PERFECT!!!!..ok..maybe not 'perfect' but at least make sence and flow..lol

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Chapter 1: silence's poem

Darkness

Blackness falls into a silver moon

The sun splashes into liquid, maroon

Fallen angels rise to lift up the sun

Reminding the sufferers another day has come

Flame

Flames of Satan’s wrath strike out

Leaving the sufferers in pain and doubt

Fire and ash do as they’re told

The helpless, the pleading, they heinously scold

Destruction

Most hope has been smoldered

The withering have been shouldered

In hopes that the next dawn

Will allow them all to move on

Hope

The hopes and the prayers

They’ve whispered for years

Are answered in destruction, flames in the night

When the evils are vanquished and the sinners find sight

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