Rini Hatake: Chapter 5

Published Jun 17, 2011, 6:53:40 PM UTC | Last updated Jun 1, 2012, 12:09:03 AM | Total Chapters 6

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This is the story about a girl who has always lived a life by herself and never felt that she could trust others unless it was her big brother. She isolated herself from the world, just running about, until she was captured and brought back to her old home of Konohagakure. How she was born is kind of mature but I think you people can stand that.

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Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Hey you guys! Thank you for reading this FanFiction that I'm having a lot of fun writing. It's an OC type of FanFiction so I understand if some of you don't like it so much but I've had this idea stuck in my head for awhile now and I'm finally making it into a story. As I had said before this is an OC FanFiction so that means that the Rini character that you are reading about is a fan-made character that I created. This is the chapter where we figure out just a hint of Rini's past but not a whole lot. Well, here's chapter 5:

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Rini was wearing a short, swamp green kimono with a blood red obi belt and a matching dark green forhead strap that was wrapped around her forhead. Now, this may just sound like something very simple to the everyday person. But when Rini walked out of the small bathroom she looked like a kidnapped princess who had secretly been a ninja undercover.

"I don't know about this you guys. I don't think it looks that good on me," Rini was usually very self consious when it came to going out on the town with her friends. When it came to missions she didn't care what anyone thought. She would usually wear a blue bra-like strappless shirt that exsposed her stomach, a dark green miniskirt, her Konoha forhead protecter around her forhead, an unzipped jonin/chunin jacket, knee-high platform boots and dark blue vocalod style sleeves with a green rim on the ends.

"ARE YOU KIDDING??!!! YOU LOOK AMAZING!!!" Rini fell to the floor from the impact of their voices. Everybody except Hinata had yelled this towards Rini. Hinata said this in a normal voice, so you could barely hear her.

"Ouch, jeez you guys. you don't have to shout. But how do you think this looks good, I'm just not seeing it."

"Here, let me show you," Tenten walked over and started to point things out to Rini. Making her spin around many times that Rini would probably have gotten dizzy,"and over all you have the most beautiful complexion.

As you've told us before, you don't even wash your face everyday and you have this pale butt colorful face that when people see it they can only wish for such beautiful skin."

"Alright, fine. I still don't get what you guys were talking about but I guess this outfit will do. But still I'd say that they Uchiha dark blue colored obi belt would go much nicer," Rini spoke of this because she had actually been born of the Hatake, Uchiha and Hyuuga clans. But that's a story for a later time.

"Okay! Now that we're all ready......LET'S GO!!!!!" Sakura and Ino had said this as the pulled the rest of the gang out the door, down the staires and through the streets towards downtown.

After about 3 minutes of running they ended up stopping just a few blocks away from town because they saw...

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