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Tatsuha Yuki's Bro

Posted Dec 13, 2006, 10:28:04 PM

This is the next part after Yuki dies, I see his bro and mistake him for Yuki, apart from the hair, i just think he's died it for some strange reason!

But  everything turns out okay he tells me who he is and i calm down and start to feel sad again, and this is a part of our story where it gets confusing and yet cool at the same time!!! :D

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  • Dec 30, 2006
    Not bad! The clothes look pretty good and I like the expressions. What I think you could improve on is the head structure; notice that their head look a bit stretched/slanted. This could have happened it you didn't draw it on a table or drew it looking at the page at an angle (I do that a lot Grin lol). I've attached a visual critique to help you help you understand what the heck I'm talking about. YesThumbs Up

    Otherwise, this is a pretty good drawing. I hope to see it finished soon!

    P.S. Gravitation!! Dance
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    • Dec 30, 2006
      Thank you ^_^ and i see what you mean, i was kinda tired at the time and wasn't concentrating lol, but thank u for the advice, i really appreciate it! Smile

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