Comment 18491

Comment ID 18491

[Art] Sephiroth Oil Painting
Jilly
Nov 12, 2005, 11:16:20 PM UTC on [Art] Sephiroth Oil Painting
Ok so when I first saw this I thought it was completely awesome(A whole lot better than I could ever do) But what bugged me about it is that it didn't flow together well to me. It may just be me but visible brush strokes bug me alot. So maybe if you smoothed it up alittle bit it might make look even better. I don't know if that helped any but I still love it!....don't hurt me Innocent

Replies

  • BogusRed
    Nov 12, 2005, 11:22:12 PM UTC
    yeah you are right. I think what might not be flowing right is the strokes in the hair and in the leather clothing. They don't look convincing. I like the brushstrokes in the background though. They look kind of cool. His face doesn't look quite right either. I'll have to take another crack at this when I get the chance.

    Thank you very much for the critique Jill Big Smile
    • Jilly
      Nov 12, 2005, 11:30:43 PM UTC
      Oh your right about the strokes in the background I like those. The strokes on him though should be smother is what I ment so you could make him out alittle more. And do finish this one I'd really loved to see how it comes out.Grin
      • BogusRed
        Nov 13, 2005, 11:46:31 AM UTC
        Thanks yeah I totally agree with your critique. And thank you for it.