Comment 57539

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Sep 6, 2007, 4:59:17 PM UTC

Something about this one just doesn't look right, the eyes look a bit big and off, and the angles on some of the armor just don't quite look like they're drawn right.

The shading is impeccable though, as usual. ;D

Comment ID 57539

Dennis

Sep 7, 2007, 10:25:38 PM UTC on [Art] Breanne

Thanks for the critique. Well I double checked my angles and compared them to my references. Her eyes were definately off and so was her mouth abit. I readjusted them but as for the armor i'm still trying to figure it out.

Thanks again for the CC.

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FireAngelStudios
Sep 8, 2007, 3:06:55 AM UTC
Well, what I can see with the armor is mostly on the right side. The round emblem looks a bit too high, the small plate under the head seems to be hanging lower on the right, and the neck guard protruding from the shoulder looks too high as well. Could be the angle, though it still looks off.
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- Dennis
  Sep 8, 2007, 5:56:56 AM UTC
  Hmmm... I'll fix it eventually but for now it's going to have to sit for a while on the back burner due to commision time constraints. Thanks for the CC I really do appreciate them.
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