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Micah's Latent Element Origin.

Before abandoning her family and leaving her future fiance behind, Nidra is faced with a gift left by the man in question.

On a rainy stormy night, Zeana is reading a book to pass the time.

In which Jo and Evan, two survivors from an apocalyptic eldritch world, find one another in the overworld. Things don't start off well.

Sammich leaves Acrine. He doesn't leave his dagger behind.

He's not sure why.

The poor young Little Wick now travels alone. The Coven is now without a leader. What brought her here, she wonders? She thinks back on the last party she had with the other Coven members to remember...

Tash takes a seat for her best friend's wedding in a famous Faedin cathedral. Her melancholy over the past is suddenly interrupted when Natalie, having just evaded a group of armed pursuers, sits next to her and starts to let off some steam. An awkward but valuable encounter ensues for the two.

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Two short stories of Tash describing her talisman and when she got her elemental abilities.

Critiques and comments are welcome!

This is just a short character description for my character Henry S. Bear. On the original image I posted its this same text but I'll post this apart for it to be easier to read.

Written entries for the Elemental OCL. In which Paiko discovers he can do less than he hopes but more than he realizes.

Meet Mousen, a boisterous rodent who likes fighting almost as much as she likes flirting. A regular tomboy whose life changes when she meets a dragon named Tilor... 

A day (or two) in the life of Seff Stark, a wolf facing a new world along with her own demons.

Lord Dalv Blackhand gets an invitation to join a tournament. He joins a member of the Scholar Collective to discuss ill omens of Avangaurds ruin.

It's the latest edition of the Dark Water Mages Spellbook magazine has of 2022 with latest spells imagineable brought down to a science availalbe were magazines and newspapers are sold

Rowen Anderson is secretive youth who now begins his first steps as an adventurer. His mission, to explore the legendary Avethian Temple from which no one has returned alive. Rowen's journey to discover the past will lay out his journey's future.

A hub for all my Morrigan lit pieces

Written entries for Brave Storm's vocation advancement pieces.

Sitting on the top of a stone cliff, I cup my hands and will the bluish white fire I can control into existence. Spreading my hands while extending my arms to their full length, I make it grow into a ball of fire as big as I am tall. I've always thought of it as a gift of sorts but others treat it like it's a curse, they see it as a mark of a demon and now I'm starting to not like it. In spite of that, I still try to use it to help, like I am now. Sleep hasn't been an issue for me so serving as a makeshift lighthouse at night is something I do whenever I can.

Training I wish I didn't have to do.

It's a bit...abnormal.