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Goku is looking after Vegeta, who currently believes he is a cat, driving Chichi away...what will happen to Vegeta? M/M,Lemon,Yaoi,AU

A late birthday present for lordofthepies. GokuxVegeta goodness! Lemon in part 2! Enjoy!

*cannot think of summary* Shonen ai

Dad, I remember oh so much.

Basically a Little red riding hood spoof, following the adventure of our young Ouji, Vegeta. Characters played by 6 Saiyans. Enjoy!

Ooooh! Another one of those moonlight affects Saiyans fics! Mine's not too different though. For my friend nekoni. GokuxVegeta, lemony!

I can guarantee this has less plot than a PWP! GokuxVegeta! Nothin but lemon!

Strangest idea I've ever had...please read and review, although...you may not like it... YAOI! Lemon!

Vegeta's trying to leave Earth, but Goku wants him to stay...can he convice him to? GokuxVegeta! YAOI! Lemon!

Someone's chained up...but who is it? Goku...or Vegeta? YAOI, lemon!

A normal day at the beach for the Z warriors...or is it? GokuxVegeta! YAOI! Lemon!

Imperial Agent Amos Drisriak is traveling alone, far from home and yearning for adventure. He has wandered far from the white sands of his desert home. Our tale begins in the vast temperate region of Kendempolis. Amos soon crosses the path of a red-haired thief his meandering trip homeward becomes a mad dash for freedom. Perhaps he hasn't heard of the saying: 'Be careful what you wish for'?

Uncle Sam, The Queen of England, and the President of France visit the local tailor.

Shaadiv; The Demon Realm - Yetra; Home to the benevolent Elundri - Trugan; The mortal world. All three worlds are connected by a thin invisible veil. Only a select few can travel between. It has been a millennia since the Dark War that sundered the three realms. Now peace reigns throughout and the Balance is restored, yet there are those who have grown weary of it.