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warning: YAOI This is an adventure and also romance between Goku and Vegeta. There's a new challenge for the z warriors, and it involves mirai Trunks dimension

A 'letter' dedicated to my two, younger half brothers.

An Ancient Secret

To those who plait the threads

Criptic-expose her devises

Encounter

State of mind

Portrait of a princess

Mousse has finally snapped. Maybe I should've made this as a pro-Ranma anti-Akane songfic. It makes a lot more sense now I think about it. Warning: Contains anti-Shampoo and anti-Colonge context.

Thought's of what it would like to be a mercenary in a fantasy world...

A modern day American Girl finds out that sometimes dreams don't come true.

This tutorial covers the basics for preparing your artwork for use in the PaperDemon Cafe Press store. Although, this may also be useful to those of you with your own Cafe Press store.

Sex,Lies,Murder.

Another poem made during class. That classroom must get the ideas going or something...I do believe its dark.

A poem I had to do for a class that I really got into. It got deep and kinda dark, and you dont really expect the character its talking about.

There are those who life to fight, that find the fight to be everything. This story tells of two who believe in this principle.

In the early episodes of DragonBall Z, Nappa and Vegeta spent quite some time in space in order to get to Earth. Who knows what dreams they could have had; well, this is one idea...

Ok, a happy poem for once! Lol, yeah! I actually can right uplifting stuff too! this is one of those poems that * I wish I had a person like this* so it just kinda floated into my head. This poem is actually REALLY old, like two years old… but here it is because it’s one of my personal favorites ^_^

A man who has driven himself crazy over a girl…or was he already gone in the first place? Was she real? Or was this an images created out of the despare of loneliness? You decide.

Inuyasha and Co. have been looking for stray shards for over two years. They meet up with new people as well as known ones before strange things begin to happen. They come to what they hope will be the end of their long journey. This is long and involed so if you just want a quick read skip it. WARNING: LEMONS in later chapters and strong language throughout the whole story.