Seven Day Revelation: chapter 5 - end of third night

Published Jan 3, 2006, 7:49:19 AM UTC | Last updated Mar 26, 2006, 3:42:33 PM | Total Chapters 3

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Hey I'm taking over this fic, written by an author whose work I admire, Pareathe. She couldn't finish it and I couldn't have that! So with her permission I'm finishing it. SUMMARY: In Pareathe's own words: Inu Yasha and Kagome already spend most of their time together, gathering shards of the Shikon no Tama around feudal Japan, but Inu Yasha hasn't been able to come to a true resolution about his feelings or their relationship. But one week stuck in Kagome's time, without youkai to hunt or jewel shards to collect, will make him see what he couldn't before.

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Chapter 2: chapter 5 - end of third night

SDR5 TITLE: Seven Day Revelation
AUTHOR: Kichi
PAIRING (if applicable): Kag/Inu
RATING: M for mature or NC-17 for LEMON!
WARNINGS: sexual content and language.
 
NOTES: PLEASE READ THIS!!!: Ok one reviewer was confused last time - I DID NOT WRITE CHAPTERS 1-3, THOSE WERE WRITTEN BY PAREATHE.  I am finishing this for her.  I got another review saying I was not keeping everyone in character and Pareathe did better, all I can say is, Pareathe told me this is my story now, and I can’t write like her, nor am I trying to.  I’m sorry if some of you won’t like it, but I’m trying my best.  That’s all I can offer on that point.  And when they mentioned Inu Yasha was OOC, well, I like him best in the Japanese subtitled version (he’s a lot meaner- love it!) And that’s how I want him to act.  So, just remember, I didn’t write the first 3 chapters, so if you notice a difference and don’t like it, I’m sorry, but I tried! :)

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SUMMARY: Kagome has just told Inu Yasha that she loves him- his reaction...
DISCLAIMER: All characters belong to Rumiko Takahashi, not me.  But since I’m not making any money from writing or posting this, who cares, right?


Chapter 5 - Fourth Morning or End of third night
        

    She saw his eyes widen a bit in shock, but the look was gone almost instantly to be replaced by sadness.
    â€śYou do?” he said, the wonder in his voice unmistakable and Kagome felt pain hit her in the gut.  When was the last time he’d heard those words?  Both his arms wound around her and held her close, she felt his chin rest on her shoulder.  She slid her hands up his back and felt him shiver.  She smiled.
    â€śYes. I have for a long time.” she admitted quietly, his grip on her tightened and his hands began to roam up and down her back.  
    â€śEven though I’m half-“
    â€ťThat doesn’t matter to me! It never has-“ she plowed over the rest of his sentence, knowing full well what his first objection would be.  “Besides I like your ears, they’re so cute!”  They held each other in silence for long moments, just enjoying each other’s reassuring caresses.  Inu Yasha buried his nose in Kagome’s hair and inhaled deeply.  She shivered as she heard his contented grumble.
    â€śI feel like I’d die without you.  Is that love? I never felt that for anyone..” he murmured and she felt her heart clench in the most wonderful way ever.
    â€śI think so.. But Inu Yasha, what-“ she didn’t want to say it, but he hugged her tighter as if he knew what she meant to say and he was already reassuring her.  “- what about Kikyo?”  His sigh reached her ears.
    â€śI don’t feel the same way about her.  I don’t want her to be hurt, but I don’t feel like this..” he lifted his head and placed a kiss on her throat.  “And I don’t think she ever felt the same either.  She would not have been with me unless I used the Shikon no Tama to become human forever.  She wanted me to become something.. That I would hate.”
    â€śInu Yasha.. If you want to use the jewel to become a full demon, I wouldn’t stop you, you know that don’t you..?  And I would still love you either way.  I just want you to be happy.”  He drew back and held her away so he could look upon her face, his amber eyes searched hers and he saw the truth for all to see.  She wouldn’t stop him, no matter what, she would do anything he asked...
    â€śI don’t know what I want.  I don’t want to be a full demon if it’s anything like those times I transformed.”  He shivered and she again leaned forward and slid into his arms with a soft sigh.  “Do you want to go inside?”
    â€śHai.” she said with a nod.

    He shut her bedroom door behind them after they had crept through the silent house.  Kagome hadn’t realized how late it was until they walked inside and saw 12:47 am on the stove clock.  It was Friday night and she had no school the next day so she could stay up as late as she wanted.  Sota, her mother, and grandfather had already gone to bed.  Her heart began to race again.  There was nothing stopping them from doing whatever they wanted- provided they were quiet.  When she felt Inu Yasha’s fingertips trace her spine on the way upstairs she guessed he might be coming to a similar conclusion.  Her heart began to beat faster.
    His earlier statement replayed over and over in her head: “I feel like I’d die without you.  Is that love? I never felt that for anyone..”  Her friends Eri and Yuka had already lost their virginity to their boy friends and they had told her that she would know who the lucky guy was going to be when the time was right.  
    She had always had a vague feeling about Inu Yasha, something about him made something in her heart scream: “Him! He’s the one!!”  That feeling was pounding through her now as he headed towards her, his amber eyes flecked with gold.  He suddenly grinned as he stepped closer to her.  At the same time he drew a deep breath through his nose. “You smell.. So good.” he breathed as her wide eyes tilted up to meet his.
    â€śInu Yasha..” she gasped as he leaned close and bent low and placed his lips upon her racing pulse.  She shivered and softly moaned as his tongue gently caressed her flesh.  
    â€śKagome, let me kiss you.” he breathed before he planted his lips on her jaw.  She felt her knees weakening and his free hand slid behind her and pulled her up against him.  He groaned softly in her ear.
    â€śYes..” she gasped and then she felt his lips on hers.  She moaned at the contact and he released her wrist and slid his now-free hand across her lower back and down to her ass and squeezed gently.  She pressed herself against him more firmly and it was his turn to gasp.  While he gently kneaded the flesh of her rear with his left hand, his right hand dropped to her waist and slid under the short t-shirt that she wore to lightly caress the bare skin of her back.  
    She did likewise and slid both hands up the back of his shirt, surprising him and making his heart beat quicken.  He slid his left hand up to the waist on the tiny shorts she wore and slowly eased his fingers under the material, waiting for Kagome to stop him.  He stopped halfway in, not wanting to scare her, and at the same time, thinking of something else he’d like to touch.  
    The smell of her heightening arousal drove him on as he slid his right hand around to her stomach and carefully touched her soft skin.  She quivered against him as their kisses grew more fevered and groaned as she licked his lips, giving him a clear invitation which he gladly accepted.  
    He plunged his tongue inside her mouth, groaning with pleasure as her sweet taste made his head spin.  Her hands, having caressed every inch of his back turned to his chest and she explored the muscle and scars by touch.  The sensation of it all was making his arousal apparent, and as Kagome pushed her hips against his he gasped, his left hand plunging down to cup her bare behind and press her more firmly against his heated desire.  
    He could feel her chest heaving in excitement and he boldly raised his right hand to touch her naked breast under her shirt.  Her response was another wave of her alluring fragrance, another heated gasp, and another press of her warm hips against his.
    His thumb brushed her nipple and then he pinched it gently before breaking their heated kiss and tugging her shirt up out of his way.  He moaned as he latched onto her erect nipple, greedily licking and kissing the soft, fragrant flesh.  He grabbed the neglected breast with his right hand and slowly massaged her nipple with his fingers.
    â€śI- Inu Yasha.”  She moaned softly and he blew gently on her nipples causing them to harden further.  She groaned, her fingers clutching his shoulders.  She gasped when he bent down and his arms quickly locked around her knees and he stood.  She fell over his shoulder and wondered where he could be taking her and was about to ask when she looked down and noticed his ass looking wonderful in those jeans, he had touched nearly every part of her and she had done the same (although she’d not made so thorough a perusal as he had) except...  She grinned and slid her hands down the back of his pants, her slim hands latching onto his firm ass.  She started giggling when he stumbled and withdrew her hands only to give him a hard slap the instant she’d been able.  He returned the favor by giving her a slap on her rear that surprisingly made her groan in pleasure.  That slight exclamation was echoed by the hanyou carrying her and she felt his teeth graze her thigh.  Before she really knew what had happened she felt herself drop and land on her bed.
    He glanced around her room and then without making a sound he made his way across the room to lift her giant dresser and set it in front of the door.
    Then he was on top of her, one knee in between her thighs, staring at her with an expression she’d never seen on a man’s face.  But it was beautiful, and whatever emotions it meant he was feeling, she was glad she’d made him feel it.  Then he leaned close, his eyes drifting shut and their lips met again.
    This time both his hands slid under her shirt and rose to massage her breasts.  She reached for the bottom of his shirt and pulled up wards.  He pulled away from her and allowed her to peel the shirt off.  Then she saw his chest heaving just like hers and sat up, reaching out to place her hand on his heart.  It was beating almost as hard as hers and she marveled at the knowledge that he was as affected as she.  It intensified the desire inside her, turning it into an aching need that only he could assuage.  Only his touch could ease it, and as if he’d read her thoughts he wrapped his arms around her and pulled her flush against him.  She gasped as she felt the very essence of his manhood hard against her as he cupped her ass and pressed her hips closer.
    â€śGods,” he moaned in her ear.  “I have to have you.” he kissed her throat feverishly, as though she might be gone in a moment.
    â€śI am yours Inu Yasha, I have been for a long time.”  She breathed.  She tugged her shirt up over her head and gasped in pleasure as his lips descended on her breasts again.  She used his preoccupation to wriggle out of her pajama pants and all that remained between them were his jeans and her panties.  
    He had noticed what she’d done, how could he not?  She was nearly naked underneath him, the moonlight made her skin glow and when she’d peeled off the thin pants he could smell her arousal far easier.  Then the scent faded and the room seemed to grow dark.  He sat up and raised his hand to inspect his nails and found them as short as any humans.
            â€śOh!” Kagome said, her eyes wider with surprise.  “You’ve turned human.”
    â€śI have.” he nodded seeing his hair even darker than the shadows in the room, like Kagome’s.  She smiled and reached out for him, her hands trailing up his arms.  He grinned back.  “You don’t mind, do you?” he said sliding his hand down to meet the warmth between her thighs.  The thin panties were the only thing keeping him from her, and he was suddenly relieved his claws were gone, it would only make things easier.
    Her gasp trailed off in a breathy moan that made his whole body quiver with excitement.  How many times had he dreamed of this?  It was embarrassing really, in his mind.  Her lips pressed feverishly to his throat as he began to caress her.  Her arms wound around his and pulled him down and her lips sought his.  He kissed her back with equal fervor and rolled onto his side so he was not crushing her with his weight.  His tongue slid into her mouth as hers had done earlier and she gladly accepted with a moan.  
    She began to grind against his hand and he smiled against her lips and slid his hand under the thin material and slid a finger between her moist lips.  Her sharp moan was music to his ears and as he began to stroke her she clung to him tighter.  Her hips began to thrust and he felt himself grow harder as he broke their kiss to cover her breasts with his lips and tongue.  Her soft gasps and muffled cries were driving him wild and he began to stroke her faster.  Suddenly her entire body froze and she yanked the pillow out from under her head and covered her face with it.  He grabbed her thighs and kissed the quivering bud, swirling his tongue over it and he heard her shriek in pleasure from under the pillow.  She lay still for a moment, her chest heaving, then pulled the pillow away to reveal her flushed face.  He smiled and scooted closer and pressed his lips to hers.
    â€śWas that good?” he asked.  She grinned, nodded, and pulled him close kissing him again.    She wrapped her legs around his waist until his pelvis was flush with hers.  He moaned against her lips and she slid one hand down to tug at the waistband of his jeans.
    â€śA-are you sure, Kagome?” he whispered as he pulled back to look in her eyes.  
    â€śHai.” she nodded and kissed him again.  He got to his knees while he still covered her with kisses and began to fumble with the button and zipper.  He succeeded after a few choice swear words and pulled away from her and jumped out of bed and began to tug them off.  Kagome giggled when he tripped as he tried to kick them off and pulled him back to her bed and rose and knelt in front of him.  He began to breath heavy when she carefully pulled the offending clothing off of him and then slid her hands up his legs and thighs.  She reached the waistband of his boxers and said: “Stand up, please.”  He did, and his erection was eye level with the beautiful girl before him.  She tugged them off so quickly he gasped and fell back onto the bed.  She grinned again as she stood and urged him to scoot back.  She placed a knee on the mattress next to his and crawled forward until they were mere inches apart.  She sat on his thighs and leaned forward placing her lips on his.  He reached up for her breasts and began to massage the soft flesh again.  His erection was throbbing with need and he slid his hands up her back and lowered her onto the bed and climbed on top of her.  He wanted to see her face when he did this.  He’d heard it was painful for girls the first time, and he wanted to be sure she was able to get through it alright.  She scooted closer to him suddenly and his tip was suddenly pressed against the soft wet flesh.  
    â€śOh god,” he gasped.
    â€śIt’s ok, Inu Yasha, I’m ready.” she murmured kissing his face repeatedly.  He wrapped his arms around her and slowly began to push in.  She winced and her muscled contracted around him.  He groaned in her ear as she clenched him.
    â€śAre you alright?” he breathed in her ear.
    â€śYes.” she said quickly, the word sounding forced.  Her face was screwed up and he frowned.  He slid in deeper, her juices easing the way.  
    â€śShit.” he gasped as he felt something- give way.  Kagome clutched him tighter, her nails digging into his back.  Finally he could go in no further.  It felt too good, he was about to lose it already.  Which was probably for the best, he figured as Kagome winced again.
    â€śDo you want me to stop?” he murmured in her ear.
    â€śNo, Inu Yasha, It’s supposed to hurt the first time. I want to do this with you, I love you.” she whispered in his human ear.  He shivered and began to kiss her feverishly as he withdrew and thrust slowly.  After a few more thrusts she began to relax and he began to quicken his pace.  She tensed up again and her inner muscles clenched around his manhood in a wonderful way, he moaned softly in her ear as her hands roamed up and down his back.  He knew his finish was coming close, and he began to go faster Kagome clutched him tighter, her whole body tense, and he grimaced, knowing he was hurting her.  But her inner muscles were clenching him harder, he knew it would be over quick, he felt it.  A few more thrusts into her soft, willing body and he spilled inside of her with a moan of pleasure.  He felt he lips pressing to his cheeks with undeniable fervor then he heard a chuckle in his ear.
    â€śWas that good?”
    â€śYes,” he breathed as he wound his arms around her and rolled them onto their sides.  “I’m sorry it hurt you though.” she smiled sweetly.  
    â€śI told you it was ok.  Besides it’s only the first few times.  So the more we do it the better it will feel.”  He grinned and kissed her.
    â€śI like the way you think.”  She laughed.



    End of the third night...   TBC..   

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