White or Black Wings: The Struggle

Published Oct 17, 2008, 3:38:27 AM UTC | Last updated Oct 18, 2008, 11:30:08 AM | Total Chapters 7

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Karin Smith, survived a car crash, a year ago. While she lived, her parents didn't. It was a mystery. How did she escape? She doesn't remember how she got out, when she awoke, the car that her parents were in was a blazed! Now, a year later, she's living alone, in a apartment, and going to school. A new student appears one day, Vincent Kaine. Jacob Gillis, her friend, and admirer doesn't seem to like this new guy, and vice visa.. Karin seems to feel a connection with the new, handsome guy. What is this connection? What could it be? And why is Vincent staring so intensely at her when he first appears in school? And what will Jacob do? Jill Francis, a rival, wants both Jacob and Vincent for herself! Will Jill be victorous? Or will Karin win, and get the guy of her dreams. And what other surpises will be known, that Vincent seems to know of. And why is Jacob acting strange? 1st pov Rating Teen Complete!

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Chapter 5: The Struggle

 Chapter 5: The struggle.

 When I woke up, I was being carried by Satan. "No! Let me go! Vincent!" I screamed. "It's too late! We are already in Hell!" Satan said evilly laughing. "What?" I said, looking around. Everything was burning, and people was burning, screaming. I covered my ears, and closed my eyes "No, I don't want to be here! I want Vincent!" Suddenly I was dropped on something soft. I opened my eyes. I was laying on a bed. I wide eyed, then looked at Satan. He was transforming back to Jacob. "N-No!" I yelled. "Karin?" Jacob, said softly. He was the old Jacob. "No, your not Jacob! It is you, Satan!" I yelled. "Karin, I love you." Jacob said as he leans over me. 

 Jacob, was about to kiss me, when I pushed him way, and ran in a direction. "You won't get anywhere, Karin!" Satan yelled. Then Three demons appeared in front of me. I stopped quickly. I was wide eyed. These were demons? They look handsome, long black hair, and they had black wings. They were triplets. "N-No!" I said stepping back. "Meet your cousins, Karin." Satan said has he grabs my shoulders. "They have been very excited to meet you, right boys?". The demons evilly smiled "Yes." They replied in unison. I shook my head no. "Don't be shy, Karin. We are all family here." Satan said. I nodded no again. "No, I don't want to be here. Vincent." I said crying.

 Satan licks my tears, "Ah, such a lovely taste. Would you like some boys?" I wide eyed. The demons nodded yes, evilly grinning. They started walking toward me. I nodded no, and struggled. "No!" I yelled. Satan laughs, then lets go of me. I ran away from them. "Time for a game boys. Hide and seek." Satan yelled. I ran down a tunnel. My tears were drying by the wind as I ran. 

 I didn't want this. Vincent where are you!? I yelled in my head. Then, I came out of the dark tunnel. Satan was waiting, clapping, "Well, i guess I win. I found the bunny." I stepped back a step "Leave me alone! I'm your niece!". Satan, steps forward to me, "That doesn't matter down here, bunny.". I backed up to a wall, which was hot. "Ouch!" I said. Satan smells the air, "Ah, your flesh, it smells delightful, burning, but I don't want to eat you." Satan said as he pulled me away from the wall.

 I cried, I was in so much pain. "Why? Why is this happening to me? " .. Satan, pulls me back to the bed. "Your father, even though he left hell, didn't say he was leaving for a human. And that's a big no-no. " Satan said as he lays me down on my side. My back was burning. "Let me go! I didn't do anything wrong!" I yelled. I felt the back of my shirt left. I, wide eyed, "No!". I felt licking on the burn spot. "No, Stop!" I cried. Satan stopped. "Did you find her, Satan?" I heard the demons asked. "Yes. You can play with her later, when I am done." Satan said. I closed my eyes, crying. Vincent? Where are you? Dad, help?, I thought. "Now, were was I?" Satan said as he leaned over me. I cringed.

 "Stop!!" I heard Vincent. "What?" Satan yelled. I looked up and saw Vincent flying down, but he had angels with him. "Vincent?!" I yelled. "Satan!" Vincent yelled, with anger. Satan quickly got up. I, got up, and ran to Vincent. Vincent lands, then holds me close. My back was still in pain. "Ah!" I winced. "Karin?" Vincent said questioning. I looked up at him "I'm okay. Now that your here." I said smiling. Vincent smiles, then looks at Satan. Satan was cornered by three beautiful white angels.

 "You, Vincent!?" Satan yells. "You betrayed Hell again!". "I guess so" Vincent said, holding me, softly. He must know of my back, I thought. "You bought a mortal down here, which is forbidden." One of the angels spoke. "No mortal alive, should never come here, unless he or she dies and is condemned by God." . "You have angered God." Another Angel said. "So what? She is his spawn!" Satan spatted. "That does not matter." An angel replied. "Vincent take her away!" an angel yelled. Suddenly Vincent picked me up and flew upward toward the sky. We were flying up, and up. "Vincent? Where are we going?" I asked. Vincent, smiles, "To visited someone.". "Oh" I said.

  Then we were surrounded by clouds. "Vincent?" I asked again. "Karin, someone is here to see you." Vincent said looking out. I looked and saw father and mother, in white, with white wings. "Mom! Dad!" I yelled. I couldn't believe it. Father smiles, "Karin, I'm glad you're alright.". "Dear." Mother said putting her hand on father's shoulder, "We're sorry, we didn't know that us being together would cause you this much pain." "Mother you knew dad was Satan?" I asked. I wanted to know. 

 Mother smiles "Yes, I did. He told me when we dated. Of course at first I didn't believe it, but he showed me he's black wings before he became a human.". "Yes. I remembered." Father laughed. "Vincent?' Father asked. "Yes, Master!?" Vincent said with honor. Father laughed, "You don't have to call me master, Vincent. That is gone.". Vincent nods. "Vincent, you have a decision, to make." 

 "A decision?" Vincent asked "You must choose what is more important." Father said. Mother and Father was flying up. "Wait?" Vincent yelled. "Father! Mother!" I yelled. "Karin, we love you, and we want you to live happily." Mother said, as they disappear in the thick clouds. "Wait! What did you mean, Master!?" Vincent yelled, then looks at me, with tears in his eyes. "Vincent!" I said, hugging him, crying. 

Vincent took me home, and dressed my burn wound on my back. He didn't say anything during the night. He stayed out on the fire escape, looking up at the stars, or was it the heavens? I couldn't bring myself to talk to him. I slept alone that night. 

The morning sun, glared in my eyes as I woke up the next morning. When I looked for Vincent, he wasn't anywhere to be found. "Vincent!" I yelled up to the sky on the fire escaped. But all I heard was birds chripin and flying above me. Vincent was gone, and left me alone. I cried as I looked up, "Why did you leave me? Don't leave me Vincent! You're all I got!" I yelled. Nothing replied. "I love you. " I whispered.

End of Chapter 5...... Please look forward to Chapter 6?


 

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