Writing Critique Requested

This is a brief copy of the notes pertaining to Don Boy's Cane that he carries everywhere. And why he supposidly named it... Jeffery. 

Time in the academy has been his most of his life, he befriended Artemisia, fey elf like him, that came to there same time. 

Springlock is Otello's trusty bow that he does carry everywhere. It's with him  in all of it, good and bad, and sometimes he believes it knows it.

On the journey to her next destination, Kolymbra encounters a weather phenomenon that dredges up an old memory from her brighter past.

Marie'De eats an enchanted bag of chips and needs help turning back to normal

Nameless reports on his study of the moonstone people and the portals and creatures that live inside 
quick warning there is some brief near drowning but its not detailed

A collection of written character development prompts for Jake.

All about Hayano's written submissions.

Kriskold turns a slime into a crystal.

Marsh's writen entries.

In which Duncan looks back on the book that brought him here.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oV5QoeEsimR4OdvrlAs-oVF-6nHjFL01kfH3PYV_i-0/edit?usp=drivesdk

Make your character into a marketable plushie, keychain, mousepad or other convention merch. Duocast idea: show your duocast partner using/wearing your merch.

Noteii gets tricked into being turned into a marketable plushie

this just in: antfarm's krita brushes literally leave them like a father getting milk. they were literally presets.

Hi, it's H again! This is just some goofy ahh writing stuff, nothing too serious. I like to write from time to time so yeah! That's it!

What I wrote for the tutorial.

9. Your character gains a secondary element temporarily and can cast tier 2 magic by themselves as a result. What is it? Draw or write about your character experimenting with their new powers

In this short story, young adventurer Liam embarks on a quest to prove himself against a rat infestation plaguing his village. As he confronts his doubts and fears in the dim light of the forest, an unexpected encounter with the mysterious shark-man, Soulas, changes him to the core.

A sequel to The Written Works set after the story has taken place, showing Jordini's struggle to adjust back to the real world. Join her showing more about this written world, and coming back only to realize that nothing in it make any sort of sense.

Noteii navigates the holiday trafffic